The normal life for me in the future
I live in an big villa on venus, in the house there is many windows, and i got an giant tv screen there fill an whole wall. And the area is an Utopia world, with many big and awesome buildings in the city, where i live.
But an normal day for me will normal be like this...
I wake up in the morning, and go out to the kitchen, where my auto-fill-fridge, i take the food i want, at the most i want egg and bacon in the morning, so i take that, i eat the egg an bacon at put on some clothes, and then i go out of the door, and go to my hovercraft, i love that car, not everybody got an hovercraft, its only for the rich peoble.
I drive to my work, i work as an mechanic man, the things i do on my work is to work with other cars, at the most of the time its just normal cars, but i better like to work with hovercrafts. I think that its an good job for me, becouse i like cars and i like to work with them, and tune them, actually it is an crime to tune cars, but becouse there is so many planets with live on, are the police having problem, with to catch all them there make crimes.
When i have free from work, i go back home, and get some food, after that i go to an fitnesscenter, and work out for about an hour, and then i go back home again. When i am at home i hanging out with freinds, tuning my hovercraft and spend a little lot of my time on cyber-space.

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SvarSletNice intro, du har en spændene måde at starte på,
SvarSlethvem du så end er, du glemte dit navn.
Der er lidt problemer med din ordstilling der gør noget af det lidt svært at forstå,
”are the police having problem, with to catch all them there make crimes”
er den sætning med flest problemer. Ellers er det mindre ting i resten at teksten, du skal også huske at når man skriver ”jeg” på engelsk så er det med stort ”I” og ikke lille ”i”.
ellers var det rigtig godt.
Erik